
Unfortunately I am driven by unknown forces which compel me to complete the series. I may have made max a bit older to start. What character would you cut from What Zombies Fear 1: A Father's Quest? The accents were horrible, again sorry to the voice talent, but you could not really tell who in the book was talking by the voice. How could the performance have been better? Sorry to the author but it was poorly written with too many holes in plot, weak character development, horrible dialogue, and too many leaps of faith to follow along and enjoy without those distractions. One has to go into a book like this with a lowered expectation and be surprised when it is properly delivered and the voice talent is great. There are many equally bad and even more much better (Mark Tufo). Has What Zombies Fear 1: A Father's Quest turned you off from other books in this genre? Maybe INFECTED would have been a better word.The author tried to bring something 'original' to the zombie template as a whole but it felt like a rip off of many single ideas from other books - zombie, vampire, werewolf, alien.and in the end it was a bit too much to swallow.When a character retells their part of a story it should read like dialogue, not like they had hours to reflect, review video, and then recant their experience in vivid and exacting detail, something NO ONE would do in real conversation. I did not like the concept very much, walking dead, almost human dead, and super zombies - I don't know.Talking zombies? Then they are not zombies. You could insert "The Flash, Hulk, Bulls-eye, Thor, etc in for the heroes names and it would have flown better, Hated the large holes in the plot, jumps from desk jockey to strategic tactician, weak characters - it goes on. There was no one thing.Is this a zombie novel? or a completely unbelievable superhero novel. What disappointed you about What Zombies Fear 1: A Father's Quest? It's like French champagne compared to this Boone's Farm.ĭoes a bite make you a zombie or a superhero? If you're looking for a zombie apocalypse series, go for that one first. It may have been an additional letdown because of its poor comparison to the "Adrian's Undead Diary" series, which I've just finished reading. It seems like the author himself wasn't very interested in this book. People bitten by zombies develop strange powers that aren't explored or contemplated by the main character in depth. The story in general was an interesting premise, but badly handled by the author. It was entirely distracting from a story that was difficult to pay attention to in the first place.

No one actually tells people "blood blossomed" under a dead body, or someone "leaped" at them, especially if English is their second language.

It read like a diary entry, rather than a conversation. The dialog was awful, especially when a character recounted something that happened to them.

It's flat and episodic with no real character or story development. This book was a true slog, and I feel cheated of a credit.
